UCAS Personal Statement Review & Feedback Service

Description

Help your teen submit a UCAS personal statement that’s authentic, polished, and ready for admissions tutors — without the stress of figuring it all out alone.

This service provides supportive, teacher-level feedback on any UCAS Personal Statement draft, written in clear, student-friendly language.
Perfect for students who want expert guidance, and for parents who would like help when school teachers don’t have time to offer detailed feedback.

Why choose a human review (not just AI)?

With the rise of tools like ChatGPT, many students try to use AI to improve their statements — but universities are becoming increasingly alert to writing that sounds artificial or overly generic.

This review focuses on authenticity, clarity, and the student’s true voice.

I help your teen:

• Sound like themselves, not like an AI

• Avoid red flags that admissions teams associate with AI-generated writing

• Strengthen reflection and personal insight

• Make sure experiences and motivations feel real and believable

• Improve structure, tone, and flow while keeping their voice intact

AI can suggest changes — but a human teacher knows what feels genuine, honest, and ready for university.

What your teen will receive

A personalised, professionally formatted PDF report including:

• Summary feedback – a warm, encouraging overview of what’s working well and the most important next steps.

• Detailed guidance on every section, aligned with UCAS themes:

  • Motivation for the course

  • Skills and knowledge from current studies

  • Experiences outside education

  • Reflection & personal development

  • Final polish and clarity

• Priority improvement list – 2–3 key targets to focus on first.

• Technical checks – tone, grammar, flow, structure, and AI-style red flags.

• Final next steps – clear actions before submission.

Turnaround: within 3–5 working days (Standard Service).

Who this service is perfect for

• Parents who want reassurance from a qualified teacher

• Students whose school cannot offer detailed personal statement support

• Home-educated students writing independently

• Students applying for competitive courses (Medicine, Vet, Oxbridge, STEM)

• Teens looking for honest, constructive feedback they can trust

Service Options

We offer three levels of support to fit every need:

Standard Review – £25
Full written report within 3–5 working days.

Express Review – £35
Receive your report within 48 hours.

Premium Two-Stage Review – £45
Full initial report + a second re-check after the student’s edits.

How it works

1. Choose your review type.

2. Complete checkout.

3. Upload the UCAS Personal Statement draft via our secure upload page → Upload My Personal Statement

4. Receive the full feedback report directly to your inbox within the timeframe selected.

Simple, supportive, and stress-free.

Help your teen submit a statement that feels genuinely theirs

This is warm, personalised guidance from an experienced teacher — not a template, not AI, and not a generic checklist.

A confident, polished personal statement starts here.